For those not even having the attention span to read 4 short and
straight forward written sentences..
Co-authored-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Improvement of grammar and punctuation. Clarify the HA limitations.
Remove future tense in some sentences. It is not good to use it in
technical/scientific papers. Rewrite some sentences to improve
understanding.
Signed-off-by: Wolfgang Link <w.link@proxmox.com>
Reviewed-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
this was broken twice but in one rollout:
* one commit fixed the grammar from "Install from USB Stick" to
"Install from a USB Flash Drive"
* then a followup comment renamed the whole thing "Prepare
Installation Media" as also other medias where handled (shortly)
The wiki link breakage isn't really detctable until rolled out on
mediawiki, and it's a bit of an obscure thing anyway..
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
and add the memory target for OSDs, included since Luminous. As well as
distinguish the memory usage between the OSD backends.
Signed-off-by: Alwin Antreich <a.antreich@proxmox.com>
Bring the usage in order, cannot create a CT from a template before
we downloaded it ;)
Also (re)-mention the web interface as a TIP.
cron job was replaced by systemd timer, adapt that too.
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
use `git show --word-diff=color` to see that almost no word change
happened, only realignment.
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
* rephrase some parts.
* update old information
* add info about pending changes and other "new" features
Co-Authored-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
Co-Authored-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas@proxmox.com>
They are major sections, equal to "Users" so do not make them a sub
section of "Users" but rather their own. This makes both also visible
in the full admin guide TOC.
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Also move the parameters which need adaption further to the back to
allow users to edit them "faster"
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Besides the fact that "usb stick" is germaenglisch it allows to move
that section up which brings the chapter in a better order, as one
needs to prepare the installation media before they can use the
installer itself ;-)
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
improve phrasing, align style of CLI commands, OSX is now macOS, Rufus
with dd mode is preferred to etcher
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
apparently sometimes users have problems reaching outside internet with
some network setups. this is the workaround a user suggested that
we should add in the wiki.
Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas@proxmox.com>
