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Adapt some wording when touching the lines.

Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
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Thomas Lamprecht 2017-10-02 15:55:38 +02:00 committed by Fabian Grünbichler
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pve-network.adoc
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@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ virtual networks.
Debian traditionally uses the `ifup` and `ifdown` commands to
configure the network. The file `/etc/network/interfaces` contains the
whole network setup. Please refer to to manual page (`man interfaces`)
whole network setup. Please refer to the manual page (`man interfaces`)
for a complete format description.
NOTE: {pve} does not write changes directly to

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@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ Separate On Cluster Creation
This is possible through the 'ring0_addr' and 'bindnet0_addr' parameter of
the 'pvecm create' command used for creating a new cluster.
If you have setup a additional NIC with a static address on 10.10.10.1/25
If you have setup an additional NIC with a static address on 10.10.10.1/25
and want to send and receive all cluster communication over this interface
you would execute:
@ -876,7 +876,7 @@ xref:pct_migration[Container Migration Chapter]
Migration Type
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The migration type defines if the migration data should be sent over a
The migration type defines if the migration data should be sent over an
encrypted (`secure`) channel or an unencrypted (`insecure`) one.
Setting the migration type to insecure means that the RAM content of a
virtual guest gets also transferred unencrypted, which can lead to

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pveum.adoc
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@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ usermod -a -G watchman heinz
Proxmox VE authentication server::
This is a unix like password store (`/etc/pve/priv/shadow.cfg`).
Password are encrypted using the SHA-256 hash method.
This is the most convenient method for for small (or even medium)
This is the most convenient method for small (or even medium)
installations where users do not need access to anything outside of
{pve}. In this case users are fully managed by {pve} and are able to
change their own passwords via the GUI.

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@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ Hard Disk
Qemu can emulate a number of storage controllers:
* the *IDE* controller, has a design which goes back to the 1984 PC/AT disk
controller. Even if this controller has been superseded by more more designs,
controller. Even if this controller has been superseded by recent designs,
each and every OS you can think of has support for it, making it a great choice
if you want to run an OS released before 2003. You can connect up to 4 devices
on this controller.
@ -219,9 +219,9 @@ A *CPU socket* is a physical slot on a PC motherboard where you can plug a CPU.
This CPU can then contain one or many *cores*, which are independent
processing units. Whether you have a single CPU socket with 4 cores, or two CPU
sockets with two cores is mostly irrelevant from a performance point of view.
However some software is licensed depending on the number of sockets you have in
your machine, in that case it makes sense to set the number of of sockets to
what the license allows you, and increase the number of cores.
However some software licenses depend on the number of sockets a machine has,
in that case it makes sense to set the number of sockets to what the license
allows you.
Increasing the number of virtual cpus (cores and sockets) will usually provide a
performance improvement though that is heavily dependent on the use of the VM.