diff --git a/pve-network.adoc b/pve-network.adoc index 38a3c7e..d5b0a48 100644 --- a/pve-network.adoc +++ b/pve-network.adoc @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ virtual networks. Debian traditionally uses the `ifup` and `ifdown` commands to configure the network. The file `/etc/network/interfaces` contains the -whole network setup. Please refer to to manual page (`man interfaces`) +whole network setup. Please refer to the manual page (`man interfaces`) for a complete format description. NOTE: {pve} does not write changes directly to diff --git a/pvecm.adoc b/pvecm.adoc index 4799670..36d18c2 100644 --- a/pvecm.adoc +++ b/pvecm.adoc @@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ Separate On Cluster Creation This is possible through the 'ring0_addr' and 'bindnet0_addr' parameter of the 'pvecm create' command used for creating a new cluster. -If you have setup a additional NIC with a static address on 10.10.10.1/25 +If you have setup an additional NIC with a static address on 10.10.10.1/25 and want to send and receive all cluster communication over this interface you would execute: @@ -876,7 +876,7 @@ xref:pct_migration[Container Migration Chapter] Migration Type ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ -The migration type defines if the migration data should be sent over a +The migration type defines if the migration data should be sent over an encrypted (`secure`) channel or an unencrypted (`insecure`) one. Setting the migration type to insecure means that the RAM content of a virtual guest gets also transferred unencrypted, which can lead to diff --git a/pveum.adoc b/pveum.adoc index 30a5551..c3eb870 100644 --- a/pveum.adoc +++ b/pveum.adoc @@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ usermod -a -G watchman heinz Proxmox VE authentication server:: This is a unix like password store (`/etc/pve/priv/shadow.cfg`). Password are encrypted using the SHA-256 hash method. -This is the most convenient method for for small (or even medium) +This is the most convenient method for small (or even medium) installations where users do not need access to anything outside of {pve}. In this case users are fully managed by {pve} and are able to change their own passwords via the GUI. diff --git a/qm.adoc b/qm.adoc index 7d2efec..b3fbe76 100644 --- a/qm.adoc +++ b/qm.adoc @@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ Hard Disk Qemu can emulate a number of storage controllers: * the *IDE* controller, has a design which goes back to the 1984 PC/AT disk -controller. Even if this controller has been superseded by more more designs, +controller. Even if this controller has been superseded by recent designs, each and every OS you can think of has support for it, making it a great choice if you want to run an OS released before 2003. You can connect up to 4 devices on this controller. @@ -219,9 +219,9 @@ A *CPU socket* is a physical slot on a PC motherboard where you can plug a CPU. This CPU can then contain one or many *cores*, which are independent processing units. Whether you have a single CPU socket with 4 cores, or two CPU sockets with two cores is mostly irrelevant from a performance point of view. -However some software is licensed depending on the number of sockets you have in -your machine, in that case it makes sense to set the number of of sockets to -what the license allows you, and increase the number of cores. +However some software licenses depend on the number of sockets a machine has, +in that case it makes sense to set the number of sockets to what the license +allows you. Increasing the number of virtual cpus (cores and sockets) will usually provide a performance improvement though that is heavily dependent on the use of the VM.