pmg-planning-deployment: minor fixups in grammar and understandability

Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas@proxmox.com>
Reviewed-By: Stoiko Ivanov <s.ivanov@proxmox.com>
Reviewed-By: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
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Oguz Bektas 2020-04-21 16:16:59 +02:00 committed by Thomas Lamprecht
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@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ the firewall and will be directly forwarded to your e-mail server.
image::images/2018_IT_infrastructure_without_Proxmox_Mail_Gateway_final_1024.png[] image::images/2018_IT_infrastructure_without_Proxmox_Mail_Gateway_final_1024.png[]
By using the {pmg}, all your e-mail traffic is forwarded to the By using the {pmg}, all your e-mail traffic is forwarded to the
Proxmox Mail Gateway, which filters the whole e-mail traffic and Proxmox Mail Gateway, which filters the e-mail traffic and
removes unwanted e-mails. You can manage incoming and outgoing mail removes unwanted e-mails. You can manage incoming and outgoing mail
traffic. traffic.
@ -21,13 +21,13 @@ image::images/2018_IT_infrastructure_with_Proxmox_Mail_Gateway_final_1024.png[]
Filtering outgoing e-mails Filtering outgoing e-mails
-------------------------- --------------------------
Many e-mail filter solutions do not scan outgoing mails. Opposed to Many e-mail filtering solutions do not scan outgoing mails. In contrast, {pmg} is
that {pmg} is designed to scan both incoming and outgoing designed to scan both incoming and outgoing e-mails. This has two major
e-mails. This has two major advantages: advantages:
. {pmg} is able to detect viruses sent from an internal host. In many . {pmg} is able to detect viruses sent from an internal host. In many
countries you are liable for sending viruses to other countries you are liable for sending viruses to other
people. The {pmg} outgoing e-mail scanning feature is an additional people. The outgoing e-mail scanning feature is an additional
protection to avoid that. protection to avoid that.
. {pmg} can gather statistics about outgoing e-mails too. Statistics . {pmg} can gather statistics about outgoing e-mails too. Statistics
@ -41,17 +41,17 @@ statistics can show you this important information. A solution which
does not scan outgoing e-mail cannot do that. does not scan outgoing e-mail cannot do that.
To enable outgoing e-mail filtering you just need to send all outgoing To enable outgoing e-mail filtering you just need to send all outgoing
e-mails through your {png} (usually by specifying Proxmox as e-mails through your {pmg} (usually by specifying Proxmox as
"smarthost" on your e-mail server. "smarthost" on your e-mail server).
[[firewall_settings]] [[firewall_settings]]
Firewall settings Firewall settings
----------------- -----------------
In order to pass e-mail traffic to the {pmg} you need to allow traffic In order to pass e-mail traffic to the {pmg} you need to allow traffic on the
on the SMTP the port. Our servers use the Network Time Protocol (NTP) SMTP port. Our software uses the Network Time Protocol (NTP) for time
for time synchronization, RAZOR, DNS, SSH, HTTP and port 8006 for the web synchronization, RAZOR, DNS, SSH, HTTP and port 8006 for the web-based
based management interface. management interface.
[options="header"] [options="header"]
|====== |======
@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ based management interface.
|GUI/API |8006 |TCP |Intranet |Proxmox |GUI/API |8006 |TCP |Intranet |Proxmox
|====== |======
CAUTION: It is advisable to restrict access to the GUI/API port as far CAUTION: It is recommended to restrict access to the GUI/API port as far
as possible. as possible.
The outgoing HTTP connection is mainly used by virus pattern updates, The outgoing HTTP connection is mainly used by virus pattern updates,
@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ System Requirements
------------------- -------------------
The {pmg} can run on dedicated server hardware or inside a virtual machine on The {pmg} can run on dedicated server hardware or inside a virtual machine on
any of the following plattforms: any of the following platforms:
* Proxmox VE (KVM) * Proxmox VE (KVM)
@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ any of the following plattforms:
* KVM (virtio drivers are integrated, great performance) * KVM (virtio drivers are integrated, great performance)
* Virtual box&trade; * VirtualBox&trade;
* Citrix Hypervisor&trade; (former XenServer&trade;) * Citrix Hypervisor&trade; (former XenServer&trade;)
@ -150,5 +150,5 @@ To use the web interface you need a modern browser, this includes:
* Firefox, a release from the current year, or the latest Extended * Firefox, a release from the current year, or the latest Extended
Support Release Support Release
* Chrome, a release from the current year * Chrome, a release from the current year
* Microsofts currently supported version of Edge * Microsoft's currently supported version of Edge
* Safari, a release from the current year * Safari, a release from the current year