diff --git a/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc b/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc index 23040cc..0b1c5dd 100644 --- a/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc +++ b/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ the firewall and will be directly forwarded to your e-mail server. image::images/2018_IT_infrastructure_without_Proxmox_Mail_Gateway_final_1024.png[] By using the {pmg}, all your e-mail traffic is forwarded to the -Proxmox Mail Gateway, which filters the whole e-mail traffic and +Proxmox Mail Gateway, which filters the e-mail traffic and removes unwanted e-mails. You can manage incoming and outgoing mail traffic. @@ -21,13 +21,13 @@ image::images/2018_IT_infrastructure_with_Proxmox_Mail_Gateway_final_1024.png[] Filtering outgoing e-mails -------------------------- -Many e-mail filter solutions do not scan outgoing mails. Opposed to -that {pmg} is designed to scan both incoming and outgoing -e-mails. This has two major advantages: +Many e-mail filtering solutions do not scan outgoing mails. In contrast, {pmg} is +designed to scan both incoming and outgoing e-mails. This has two major +advantages: . {pmg} is able to detect viruses sent from an internal host. In many countries you are liable for sending viruses to other -people. The {pmg} outgoing e-mail scanning feature is an additional +people. The outgoing e-mail scanning feature is an additional protection to avoid that. . {pmg} can gather statistics about outgoing e-mails too. Statistics @@ -41,17 +41,17 @@ statistics can show you this important information. A solution which does not scan outgoing e-mail cannot do that. To enable outgoing e-mail filtering you just need to send all outgoing -e-mails through your {png} (usually by specifying Proxmox as -"smarthost" on your e-mail server. +e-mails through your {pmg} (usually by specifying Proxmox as +"smarthost" on your e-mail server). [[firewall_settings]] Firewall settings ----------------- -In order to pass e-mail traffic to the {pmg} you need to allow traffic -on the SMTP the port. Our servers use the Network Time Protocol (NTP) -for time synchronization, RAZOR, DNS, SSH, HTTP and port 8006 for the web -based management interface. +In order to pass e-mail traffic to the {pmg} you need to allow traffic on the +SMTP port. Our software uses the Network Time Protocol (NTP) for time +synchronization, RAZOR, DNS, SSH, HTTP and port 8006 for the web-based +management interface. [options="header"] |====== @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ based management interface. |GUI/API |8006 |TCP |Intranet |Proxmox |====== -CAUTION: It is advisable to restrict access to the GUI/API port as far +CAUTION: It is recommended to restrict access to the GUI/API port as far as possible. The outgoing HTTP connection is mainly used by virus pattern updates, @@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ System Requirements ------------------- The {pmg} can run on dedicated server hardware or inside a virtual machine on -any of the following plattforms: +any of the following platforms: * Proxmox VE (KVM) @@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ any of the following plattforms: * KVM (virtio drivers are integrated, great performance) -* Virtual box™ +* VirtualBox™ * Citrix Hypervisor™ (former XenServer™) @@ -150,5 +150,5 @@ To use the web interface you need a modern browser, this includes: * Firefox, a release from the current year, or the latest Extended Support Release * Chrome, a release from the current year -* Microsofts currently supported version of Edge +* Microsoft's currently supported version of Edge * Safari, a release from the current year