pmg-planning-deployment: minor fixups in grammar and understandability

Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas@proxmox.com>
Reviewed-By: Stoiko Ivanov <s.ivanov@proxmox.com>
Reviewed-By: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
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Oguz Bektas 2020-04-21 16:16:59 +02:00 committed by Thomas Lamprecht
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@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ the firewall and will be directly forwarded to your e-mail server.
image::images/2018_IT_infrastructure_without_Proxmox_Mail_Gateway_final_1024.png[]
By using the {pmg}, all your e-mail traffic is forwarded to the
Proxmox Mail Gateway, which filters the whole e-mail traffic and
Proxmox Mail Gateway, which filters the e-mail traffic and
removes unwanted e-mails. You can manage incoming and outgoing mail
traffic.
@ -21,13 +21,13 @@ image::images/2018_IT_infrastructure_with_Proxmox_Mail_Gateway_final_1024.png[]
Filtering outgoing e-mails
--------------------------
Many e-mail filter solutions do not scan outgoing mails. Opposed to
that {pmg} is designed to scan both incoming and outgoing
e-mails. This has two major advantages:
Many e-mail filtering solutions do not scan outgoing mails. In contrast, {pmg} is
designed to scan both incoming and outgoing e-mails. This has two major
advantages:
. {pmg} is able to detect viruses sent from an internal host. In many
countries you are liable for sending viruses to other
people. The {pmg} outgoing e-mail scanning feature is an additional
people. The outgoing e-mail scanning feature is an additional
protection to avoid that.
. {pmg} can gather statistics about outgoing e-mails too. Statistics
@ -41,17 +41,17 @@ statistics can show you this important information. A solution which
does not scan outgoing e-mail cannot do that.
To enable outgoing e-mail filtering you just need to send all outgoing
e-mails through your {png} (usually by specifying Proxmox as
"smarthost" on your e-mail server.
e-mails through your {pmg} (usually by specifying Proxmox as
"smarthost" on your e-mail server).
[[firewall_settings]]
Firewall settings
-----------------
In order to pass e-mail traffic to the {pmg} you need to allow traffic
on the SMTP the port. Our servers use the Network Time Protocol (NTP)
for time synchronization, RAZOR, DNS, SSH, HTTP and port 8006 for the web
based management interface.
In order to pass e-mail traffic to the {pmg} you need to allow traffic on the
SMTP port. Our software uses the Network Time Protocol (NTP) for time
synchronization, RAZOR, DNS, SSH, HTTP and port 8006 for the web-based
management interface.
[options="header"]
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@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ based management interface.
|GUI/API |8006 |TCP |Intranet |Proxmox
|======
CAUTION: It is advisable to restrict access to the GUI/API port as far
CAUTION: It is recommended to restrict access to the GUI/API port as far
as possible.
The outgoing HTTP connection is mainly used by virus pattern updates,
@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ System Requirements
-------------------
The {pmg} can run on dedicated server hardware or inside a virtual machine on
any of the following plattforms:
any of the following platforms:
* Proxmox VE (KVM)
@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ any of the following plattforms:
* KVM (virtio drivers are integrated, great performance)
* Virtual box&trade;
* VirtualBox&trade;
* Citrix Hypervisor&trade; (former XenServer&trade;)
@ -150,5 +150,5 @@ To use the web interface you need a modern browser, this includes:
* Firefox, a release from the current year, or the latest Extended
Support Release
* Chrome, a release from the current year
* Microsofts currently supported version of Edge
* Microsoft's currently supported version of Edge
* Safari, a release from the current year