useful cli tools: fix typos and grammar

Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas@proxmox.com>
Reviewed-By: Stoiko Ivanov <s.ivanov@proxmox.com>
Reviewed-By: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
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Oguz Bektas 2020-04-23 13:32:44 +02:00 committed by Thomas Lamprecht
parent c9c208933b
commit 0a739daea6
7 changed files with 16 additions and 15 deletions

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`nmap` is designed to allow system administrators to scan large
networks to determine which hosts are up and what services they are
offering. You can use nmap to test your firewall setting, for example
networks to determine which hosts are up and what services they
offer. You can use nmap to test your firewall settings, for example
to see if the required ports are open.
.Test Razor port (tcp port 2703):
@ -20,5 +20,6 @@ PORT STATE SERVICE
Nmap done: 1 IP address (1 host up) scanned in 6.83 seconds
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See the https://nmap.org/book/man.html[Nmap Reference Guide], also available as
manual page (`man nmap`), for more information about nmap.
For more information about `nmap` usage, see the
https://nmap.org/book/man.html[Nmap Reference Guide], also available as a manual
page (`man nmap`).

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@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ pmgdb - Database Management Toolkit
endif::manvolnum[]
The `pmgdb` toolkit is used to simplify common database management
tasks. Most important, it is used internally to create and initialize
tasks. Most importantly, it is used internally to create and initialize
the default database. You can also use it to reset the filter rules
back to factory defaults:
@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ back to factory defaults:
pmgdb reset
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Or you can dump a human readable copy of the filter rules:
Or you can dump a human-readable copy of the filter rules:
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pmgdb dump

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@ -25,8 +25,8 @@ pmgperf - Proxmox Simple Performance Benchmark
:pmg-toplevel:
endif::manvolnum[]
The command line tool `pmgperf` tries to gather some general
performance data. This is mostly useful for debugging and to identify
The command line tool `pmgperf` gathers some general
performance data. This is mostly useful for debugging and identifying
performance bottlenecks. It computes the following metrics:
[horizontal]

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@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ pmgreport - Send daily system report email
:pmg-toplevel:
endif::manvolnum[]
This binary generates and send daily system report email.
Generates and sends the daily system report email.
ifdef::manvolnum[]
include::pmg-copyright.adoc[]

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@ -23,9 +23,9 @@ pmgsubscription - Subscription Management
=========================================
endif::manvolnum[]
{pmg} is free open software, and the company that developed it
{pmg} is free and open-source software. The company that develops it
(Proxmox Server Solutions GmbH) offers {pricing-url}[support] in many
ways, with different support channel, level and pricing.
ways, with different support channels, levels, and pricing.
The tool `pmgsubscription` is used to handle {pmg}
subscriptions. Please use the GUI or the `set` command to upload a new

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This is a small wrapper around `apt-get dist-upgrade`. We use this to
print additional information (kernel restart required?), and
optionally run an interactive shell after the update. This binary is
optionally run an interactive shell after the update. It is
invoked when starting an upgrade using the web GUI.
If you are already logged in on the console, it is peferable to invoke
If you are already logged in on the console, it is preferable to invoke
`apt-get` directly.
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@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ pmgversion - Version Info
:pmg-toplevel:
endif::manvolnum[]
The binary `pmgversion` prints detailed version information for {pmg}
`pmgversion` prints detailed version information for {pmg}
packages.
.Examples
@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ Print {pmg} version:
# pmgversion
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List version details for important packages:
List version details for important packages:
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# pmgversion -v