diff --git a/nmap.adoc b/nmap.adoc index 3141253..1a06b79 100644 --- a/nmap.adoc +++ b/nmap.adoc @@ -3,8 +3,8 @@ ------------------- `nmap` is designed to allow system administrators to scan large -networks to determine which hosts are up and what services they are -offering. You can use nmap to test your firewall setting, for example +networks to determine which hosts are up and what services they +offer. You can use nmap to test your firewall settings, for example to see if the required ports are open. .Test Razor port (tcp port 2703): @@ -20,5 +20,6 @@ PORT STATE SERVICE Nmap done: 1 IP address (1 host up) scanned in 6.83 seconds ---- -See the https://nmap.org/book/man.html[Nmap Reference Guide], also available as -manual page (`man nmap`), for more information about nmap. +For more information about `nmap` usage, see the +https://nmap.org/book/man.html[Nmap Reference Guide], also available as a manual +page (`man nmap`). diff --git a/pmgdb.adoc b/pmgdb.adoc index 385149f..60f6a76 100644 --- a/pmgdb.adoc +++ b/pmgdb.adoc @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ pmgdb - Database Management Toolkit endif::manvolnum[] The `pmgdb` toolkit is used to simplify common database management -tasks. Most important, it is used internally to create and initialize +tasks. Most importantly, it is used internally to create and initialize the default database. You can also use it to reset the filter rules back to factory defaults: @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ back to factory defaults: pmgdb reset ---- -Or you can dump a human readable copy of the filter rules: +Or you can dump a human-readable copy of the filter rules: ---- pmgdb dump diff --git a/pmgperf.adoc b/pmgperf.adoc index 24b6930..8cfcd8d 100644 --- a/pmgperf.adoc +++ b/pmgperf.adoc @@ -25,8 +25,8 @@ pmgperf - Proxmox Simple Performance Benchmark :pmg-toplevel: endif::manvolnum[] -The command line tool `pmgperf` tries to gather some general -performance data. This is mostly useful for debugging and to identify +The command line tool `pmgperf` gathers some general +performance data. This is mostly useful for debugging and identifying performance bottlenecks. It computes the following metrics: [horizontal] diff --git a/pmgreport.adoc b/pmgreport.adoc index ae30625..db9d8b3 100644 --- a/pmgreport.adoc +++ b/pmgreport.adoc @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ pmgreport - Send daily system report email :pmg-toplevel: endif::manvolnum[] -This binary generates and send daily system report email. +Generates and sends the daily system report email. ifdef::manvolnum[] include::pmg-copyright.adoc[] diff --git a/pmgsubscription.adoc b/pmgsubscription.adoc index 792beb4..246e876 100644 --- a/pmgsubscription.adoc +++ b/pmgsubscription.adoc @@ -23,9 +23,9 @@ pmgsubscription - Subscription Management ========================================= endif::manvolnum[] -{pmg} is free open software, and the company that developed it +{pmg} is free and open-source software. The company that develops it (Proxmox Server Solutions GmbH) offers {pricing-url}[support] in many -ways, with different support channel, level and pricing. +ways, with different support channels, levels, and pricing. The tool `pmgsubscription` is used to handle {pmg} subscriptions. Please use the GUI or the `set` command to upload a new diff --git a/pmgupgrade.adoc b/pmgupgrade.adoc index ebdd73e..7f736b9 100644 --- a/pmgupgrade.adoc +++ b/pmgupgrade.adoc @@ -26,10 +26,10 @@ endif::manvolnum[] This is a small wrapper around `apt-get dist-upgrade`. We use this to print additional information (kernel restart required?), and -optionally run an interactive shell after the update. This binary is +optionally run an interactive shell after the update. It is invoked when starting an upgrade using the web GUI. -If you are already logged in on the console, it is peferable to invoke +If you are already logged in on the console, it is preferable to invoke `apt-get` directly. ---- diff --git a/pmgversion.adoc b/pmgversion.adoc index 8ceb397..9f86e7f 100644 --- a/pmgversion.adoc +++ b/pmgversion.adoc @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ pmgversion - Version Info :pmg-toplevel: endif::manvolnum[] -The binary `pmgversion` prints detailed version information for {pmg} +`pmgversion` prints detailed version information for {pmg} packages. .Examples @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ Print {pmg} version: # pmgversion ---- -List version details for important packages: +List version details for important packages: ---- # pmgversion -v