diff --git a/howto-improve-pve-docs.adoc b/howto-improve-pve-docs.adoc index 940e050..3fa3ab0 100644 --- a/howto-improve-pve-docs.adoc +++ b/howto-improve-pve-docs.adoc @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ [[howto_improve_pve_docs]] -Improving the Proxmox VE Documentation --------------------------------------- +Improving the {pve} Documentation +--------------------------------- ifdef::wiki[] :pve-toplevel: endif::wiki[] diff --git a/pve-installation.adoc b/pve-installation.adoc index f464394..cc435ef 100644 --- a/pve-installation.adoc +++ b/pve-installation.adoc @@ -1,3 +1,4 @@ +[[chapter_installation]] Installing {pve} ================ ifndef::manvolnum[] @@ -12,10 +13,10 @@ provided by Proxmox include a complete Debian system (Debian 10 Buster for {pve} version 6.x) as well as all necessary {pve} packages. The installer will guide through the setup, allowing you to partition the local -disk(s), apply basic system configurations (e.g. timezone, language, network) -and install all required packages. This process should not take more than a few -minutes. Installing with the provided ISO is the recommended method for new and -existing users. +disk(s), apply basic system configurations (for example, timezone, language, +network) and install all required packages. This process should not take more +than a few minutes. Installing with the provided ISO is the recommended method +for new and existing users. Alternatively, {pve} can be installed on top of an existing Debian system. This option is only recommended for advanced users because detailed knowledge about @@ -28,6 +29,7 @@ include::pve-system-requirements.adoc[] endif::wiki[] +[[installation_installer]] Using the {pve} Installer ------------------------- @@ -38,10 +40,10 @@ Download the installer ISO at {website}en/downloads. It includes the following: * The {pve} installer, which partitions the local disk(s) with ext4, ext3, xfs or ZFS and installs the operating system. -* {pve} kernel (Linux) with KVM and LXC support +* {pve} Linux kernel with KVM and LXC support -* Complete toolset for administering virtual machines, containers, and all - necessary resources +* Complete toolset for administering virtual machines, containers, the host + system, clusters and all necessary resources * Web-based management interface diff --git a/pve-usbstick.adoc b/pve-usbstick.adoc index e531de7..7deb6d7 100644 --- a/pve-usbstick.adoc +++ b/pve-usbstick.adoc @@ -116,5 +116,5 @@ Boot your Server from the USB Flash Drive ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Connect the USB flash drive to your server and make sure that booting from USB -is enabled (check your servers BIOS). Then follow the steps in the installation -wizard. +is enabled (check your servers firmware settings). Then follow the steps in the +xref:chapter_installation[installation wizard].