pvenode/wake-on-lan: language fix-up

minor corrections to the introduction and wake-on-lan section of
"Proxmox VE Node Management"

also expand introduction, based on new content

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
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Dylan Whyte 2021-09-01 16:16:15 +02:00 committed by Thomas Lamprecht
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endif::wiki[]
endif::manvolnum[]
The {PVE} node management tool (`pvenode`) allows to control node specific
The {PVE} node management tool (`pvenode`) allows you to control node specific
settings and resources.
Currently `pvenode` allows to set a node's description and to manage
the node's SSL certificates used for the API and the web GUI through `pveproxy`.
Currently `pvenode` allows you to set a node's description, run various
bulk operations on the node's guests, view the node's task history, and
manage the node's SSL certificates, which are used for the API and the web GUI
through `pveproxy`.
ifdef::manvolnum[]
include::output-format.adoc[]
@ -43,7 +45,7 @@ Examples
Both files need to be PEM encoded. `certificate.key` contains the private key
and `certificate.crt` contains the whole certificate chain.
.Setup ACME account and order a certificate for local node.
.Setup ACME account and order a certificate for the local node.
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pvenode acme account register default mail@example.invalid
@ -56,19 +58,19 @@ endif::manvolnum[]
Wake-on-LAN
~~~~~~~~~~~
Wake-on-LAN (WoL) allows to switch on a sleeping computer in the network by
sending a magic packet. At least one NIC must support this feature and the
respective option needs to be enabled in the computers firmware (BIOS/UEFI)
Wake-on-LAN (WoL) allows you to switch on a sleeping computer in the network, by
sending a magic packet. At least one NIC must support this feature, and the
respective option needs to be enabled in the computer's firmware (BIOS/UEFI)
configuration. The option name can vary from 'Enable Wake-on-Lan' to
'Power On By PCIE Device', check your motherboards vendor manual, if unsure.
`ethtool` can be used to check the WoL configuration of `<interface>` by
running:
'Power On By PCIE Device'; check your motherboard's vendor manual, if you're
unsure. `ethtool` can be used to check the WoL configuration of `<interface>`
by running:
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ethtool <interface> | grep Wake-on
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`pvenode` allows to wake sleeping members of a cluster via WoL using the
`pvenode` allows you to wake sleeping members of a cluster via WoL, using the
command:
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@ -76,8 +78,8 @@ pvenode wakeonlan <node>
----
This broadcasts the WoL magic packet on UDP port 9, containing the MAC address
of `<node>` obtained from the `wakeonlan` property. The node specific
`wakeonlan` property can be set by the following command:
of `<node>` obtained from the `wakeonlan` property. The node-specific
`wakeonlan` property can be set using the following command:
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pvenode config set -wakeonlan XX:XX:XX:XX:XX:XX