sysadmin.adoc: improve wording

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Dietmar Maurer 2016-01-06 12:56:09 +01:00
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@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ the base system, and you know how you want to configure and use the
local storage. Network configuration is also completely up to you. local storage. Network configuration is also completely up to you.
In general, this is not trivial, especially when you use LVM or In general, this is not trivial, especially when you use LVM or
ZFS. This is why we provide an installation CDROM for {pve}. That ZFS. This is why we provide an installation CD-ROM for {pve}. That
installer just ask you a few questions, then partitions the local installer just ask you a few questions, then partitions the local
disk(s), installs all required packages, and configures the system disk(s), installs all required packages, and configures the system
including a basic network setup. You can get a fully functional system including a basic network setup. You can get a fully functional system
@ -204,8 +204,8 @@ within a few minutes, including the following:
NOTE: By default, the complete server is used and all existing data is NOTE: By default, the complete server is used and all existing data is
removed. removed.
Installation Options Using the {pve} Installation CD-ROM
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Please insert the installation CD-ROM, then boot from that Please insert the installation CD-ROM, then boot from that
drive. Immediately afterwards you can choose the following menu drive. Immediately afterwards you can choose the following menu
@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ functional and error free.
You normally select *Install Proxmox VE* to start the installation. You normally select *Install Proxmox VE* to start the installation.
After that you get prompted to select the target hard disk(s). The After that you get prompted to select the target hard disk(s). The
`Options` button beside lets you select the target file system, and `Options` button aside lets you select the target file system, and
defaults to `ext4`. defaults to `ext4`.
If you have more than one disk, you can also select ZFS here. ZFS If you have more than one disk, you can also select ZFS here. ZFS