ceph: follow up rewords & fixes

Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>

pveceph.adoc

@@ -79,17 +79,16 @@ Check also the recommendations from
 http://docs.ceph.com/docs/luminous/start/hardware-recommendations/[Ceph's website].
 
 .CPU
-As higher the core frequency the better, this will reduce latency.  Among other
+Higher CPU core frequency reduce latency and should be preferred. As a simple
-things, this benefits the services of Ceph, as they can process data faster.
+rule of thumb, you should assign a CPU core (or thread) to each Ceph service to
-To simplify planning, you should assign a CPU core (or thread) to each Ceph
+provide enough resources for stable and durable Ceph performance.
-service to provide enough resources for stable and durable Ceph performance.
 
 .Memory
 Especially in a hyper-converged setup, the memory consumption needs to be
-carefully monitored. In addition to the intended workload (VM / Container),
+carefully monitored. In addition to the intended workload from virtual machines
-Ceph needs enough memory to provide good and stable performance. As a rule of
+and container, Ceph needs enough memory available to provide good and stable
-thumb, for roughly 1TiB of data, 1 GiB of memory will be used by an OSD. With
+performance. As a rule of thumb, for roughly 1 TiB of data, 1 GiB of memory
-additionally needed memory for OSD caching.
+will be used by an OSD. OSD caching will use additional memory.
 
 .Network
 We recommend a network bandwidth of at least 10 GbE or more, which is used
@@ -97,15 +96,14 @@ exclusively for Ceph. A meshed network setup
 footnote:[Full Mesh Network for Ceph {webwiki-url}Full_Mesh_Network_for_Ceph_Server]
 is also an option if there are no 10 GbE switches available.
 
-To be explicit about the network, since Ceph is a distributed network storage,
+The volume of traffic, especially during recovery, will interfere with other
-its traffic must be put on its own physical network. The volume of traffic
+services on the same network and may even break the {pve} cluster stack.
-especially during recovery will interfere with other services on the same
-network.
 
 Further, estimate your bandwidth needs. While one HDD might not saturate a 1 Gb
-link, a SSD or a NVMe SSD certainly can. Modern NVMe SSDs will even saturate 10
+link, multiple HDD OSDs per node can, and modern NVMe SSDs will even saturate
-Gb of bandwidth. You also should consider higher bandwidths, as these tend to
+10 Gbps of bandwidth quickly. Deploying a network capable of even more bandwith
-come with lower latency.
+will ensure that it isn't your bottleneck and won't be anytime soon, 25, 40 or
+even 100 GBps are possible.
 
 .Disks
 When planning the size of your Ceph cluster, it is important to take the
@@ -114,16 +112,21 @@ might take long. It is recommended that you use SSDs instead of HDDs in small
 setups to reduce recovery time, minimizing the likelihood of a subsequent
 failure event during recovery.
 
-In general SSDs will provide more IOPs then spinning disks. This fact and the
+In general SSDs will provide more IOPs than spinning disks. This fact and the
 higher cost may make a xref:pve_ceph_device_classes[class based] separation of
-pools appealing.  Another possibility to speedup OSDs is to use a faster disk
+pools appealing. Another possibility to speedup OSDs is to use a faster disk
 as journal or DB/WAL device, see xref:pve_ceph_osds[creating Ceph OSDs]. If a
 faster disk is used for multiple OSDs, a proper balance between OSD and WAL /
 DB (or journal) disk must be selected, otherwise the faster disk becomes the
 bottleneck for all linked OSDs.
 
 Aside from the disk type, Ceph best performs with an even sized and distributed
-amount of disks per node. For example, 4x disks à 500 GB in each node.
+amount of disks per node. For example, 4 x 500 GB disks with in each node is
+better than a mixed setup with a single 1 TB and three 250 GB disk.
+
+One also need to balance OSD count and single OSD capacity. More capacity
+allows to increase storage density, but it also means that a single OSD
+failure forces ceph to recover more data at once.
 
 .Avoid RAID
 As Ceph handles data object redundancy and multiple parallel writes to disks
@@ -137,8 +140,8 @@ the ones from Ceph.
 WARNING: Avoid RAID controller, use host bus adapter (HBA) instead.
 
 NOTE: Above recommendations should be seen as a rough guidance for choosing
-hardware. Therefore, it is still essential to test your setup and monitor
+hardware. Therefore, it is still essential to adapt it to your specific needs,
-health & performance.
+test your setup and monitor health and performance continuously.
 
 
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