package-repos: improve wording partly based on pmg-docs

Some sentences are phrased better and more expansive in pmg-docs, so
take them from there and adapt them as needed.

Signed-off-by: Christoph Heiss <c.heiss@proxmox.com>
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Christoph Heiss 2024-03-21 16:29:27 +01:00 committed by Thomas Lamprecht
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{pve} uses http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Advanced_Packaging_Tool[APT] as its
package management tool like any other Debian-based system.
{pve} automatically checks for package updates on a daily basis. The `root@pam`
user is notified via email about available updates. From the GUI, the
'Changelog' button can be used to see more details about an selected update.
Repositories in {pve}
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
@ -57,21 +61,18 @@ deb http://security.debian.org/debian-security bookworm-security main contrib
{pve} Enterprise Repository
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is the default, stable, and recommended repository, available for all {pve}
subscription users. It contains the most stable packages and is suitable for
production use. The `pve-enterprise` repository is enabled by default:
This is the recommended repository and available for all {pve} subscription
users. It contains the most stable packages and is suitable for production use.
The `pve-enterprise` repository is enabled by default:
.File `/etc/apt/sources.list.d/pve-enterprise.list`
----
deb https://enterprise.proxmox.com/debian/pve bookworm pve-enterprise
----
The `root@pam` user is notified via email about available updates. Click the
'Changelog' button in the GUI to see more details about the selected update.
You need a valid subscription key to access the `pve-enterprise` repository.
Different support levels are available. Further details can be found at
{pricing-url}.
Please note that you need a valid subscription key to access the
`pve-enterprise` repository. We offer different support levels, which you can
find further details about at {pricing-url}.
NOTE: You can disable this repository by commenting out the above line using a
`#` (at the start of the line). This prevents error messages if your host does
@ -82,9 +83,10 @@ repository in that case.
{pve} No-Subscription Repository
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is the recommended repository for testing and non-production use. Its
packages are not as heavily tested and validated. You don't need a subscription key
to access the `pve-no-subscription` repository.
As the name suggests, you do not need a subscription key to access
this repository. It can be used for testing and non-production
use. It's not recommended to use this on production servers, as these
packages are not always as heavily tested and validated.
We recommend to configure this repository in `/etc/apt/sources.list`.