docs: installation: fix typos, and other small changes

switch from `Proxmox projects` to `Proxmox solutions`.
Add missing words, such as `the` and drop `also`s.

And other small changes that don't affect the actual content or meaning.

Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
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Aaron Lauterer 2022-09-09 12:28:35 +02:00 committed by Thomas Lamprecht
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@ -12,19 +12,19 @@ System Requirements
* Debian based system (physical host, VM or container)
* Sufficient storage space for the local mirrors.
For a basic Debian and Proxmox VE we recommend at least 150 GB
For a basic Debian and Proxmox VE we recommend at least 150 GiB
* A filesystem supporting hard links for both, local host and external medias.
Note that most Linux derived file systems support hard links, but Windows derived ones (e.g.,
\*FAT) do *not* support hard links.
* A file system supporting hard links for both, the local host and the external medium. Note that
most Linux derived file systems support hard links, but Windows derived ones (for example, \*FAT)
do *not* support hard links.
.. _apt_install_pom:
Installation via APT
--------------------
If the host you want to install the ``proxmox-offline-mirror`` tools already has a package
repository from a Proxmox Project configured, you can simply install the offline mirror tool through
If the host you want to install the ``proxmox-offline-mirror`` tools on, already has a package
repository from a Proxmox solution configured, you can simply install the offline mirror tool with
``apt``:
.. code-block:: console
@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ repository from a Proxmox Project configured, you can simply install the offline
# apt update
# apt install proxmox-offline-mirror
If you do not have any Proxmox project's repository set up, see :ref:`package_repos_secure_apt` and
If you do not have any Proxmox repository set up, see :ref:`package_repos_secure_apt` and
:ref:`package_repositories_client_only_apt` for how to do so before using above commands.
Debian Package Repositories
@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ defined in ``/etc/apt/sources.list`` and the ``.list`` files found in the ``/etc
directory. Updates can be installed directly with the ``apt`` command line tool, or via the GUI.
APT ``sources.list`` files list one package repository per line, with the most preferred source
listed first. Empty lines are ignored and a ``#`` character anywhere on a line marks the remainder
listed first. Empty lines are ignored, and a ``#`` character anywhere on a line marks the remainder
of that line as a comment. The information available from the configured sources is acquired by
``apt update``.
@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ verify that all packages are from a trusted source.
.. tip:: If you install Proxmox Offline Mirror on a system with an existing Proxmox Project's
installation, the verification key is already installed.
If you install Proxmox Backup Server on top of Debian Bullseye, download and install the key with
If you install Proxmox Offline Mirror on top of Debian Bullseye, download and install the key with
the following commands:
.. code-block:: console
@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ Verify the SHA512 checksum afterwards with the expected output below:
# sha512sum /etc/apt/trusted.gpg.d/proxmox-release-bullseye.gpg
7fb03ec8a1675723d2853b84aa4fdb49a46a3bb72b9951361488bfd19b29aab0a789a4f8c7406e71a69aabbc727c936d3549731c4659ffa1a08f44db8fdcebfa /etc/apt/trusted.gpg.d/proxmox-release-bullseye.gpg
and the md5sum, with the expected output below:
or the md5sum, with the expected output below:
.. code-block:: console
@ -95,13 +95,14 @@ We recommend re-using the ``pbs-client`` repository for installing the Proxmox O
vanilla Debian system.
.. hint:: While you could also use a Proxmox VE, Proxmox Backup Server or Proxmox Mail Gateway
repository, those ship also some updated packages form Debian native packages, which would get
pulled in even if not required for the offline mirroring.
repository, those ship some updated packages from Debian native packages, which would get pulled
in, even if not required for the offline mirroring.
Repositories for Debian 11 (Bullseye) based releases
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Edit the file ``/etc/apt/sources.list.d/pbs-client.list`` and add the following snipped
First edit the file ``/etc/apt/sources.list.d/pbs-client.list`` and add the following snippet:
.. code-block:: sources.list
:caption: File: ``/etc/apt/sources.list.d/pbs-client.list``