cli tools: language fixup

minor rewordings and corrections in section "Command Line Tools"

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
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Dylan Whyte 2021-07-13 17:54:04 +02:00 committed by Stoiko Ivanov
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`nmap` is designed to allow system administrators to scan large
networks to determine which hosts are up and what services they
offer. You can use nmap to test your firewall settings, for example
networks, to determine which hosts are up and what services they
offer. You can use nmap to test your firewall settings, for example,
to see if the required ports are open.
.Test Razor port (tcp port 2703):

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@ -26,9 +26,9 @@ pmgdb - Database Management Toolkit
endif::manvolnum[]
The `pmgdb` toolkit is used to simplify common database management
tasks. Most importantly, it is used internally to create and initialize
tasks. It is primarily used internally to create and initialize
the default database. You can also use it to reset the filter rules
back to factory defaults:
to factory defaults:
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pmgdb reset

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@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ CPU BOGOMIPS:: bogomips sum of all CPUs
REGEX/SECOND:: regular expressions per second (perl performance
test), should be above 1000000.
HD SIZE:: harddisk size
HD SIZE:: hard disk size
BUFFERED READS:: simple HD read test. Modern HDs should reach at
least 100 MB/sec
@ -45,14 +45,14 @@ values < 8 milliseconds. Common IDE/SATA disks get values from 15 to
20 ms. SSD seek times should be below 1ms.
FSYNCS/SECOND:: value should be greater than 200 (you should enable
'write back' cache mode on you RAID controller - needs a battery
'write-back' cache mode on you RAID controller - needs a battery
backed cache (BBWC)).
DNS EXT:: average time to resolve an external DNS name
DNS INT:: average time to resolve a local DNS name
Here is an example output generated by the tool:
Here is an example of the output generated by the tool:
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# pmgperf

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@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ pmgqm - Quarantine Management Toolkit
:pmg-toplevel:
endif::manvolnum[]
Toolkit to manage spam an virus quarantine, and send spam report mails.
Toolkit to manage spam and virus quarantine, and send spam report mails.
ifdef::manvolnum[]
include::pmg-copyright.adoc[]

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@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ List entries:
# pmgsh ls /
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Call method 'GET' on an specific API path:
Call the 'GET' method on a specific API path:
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# pmgsh get /version

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@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ pmgupgrade - Upgrade Proxmox Mail Gateway
endif::manvolnum[]
This is a small wrapper around `apt full-upgrade`. We use this to print
additional information, like when a node reboot due to a kernel update is
required. Additionally, it can run an interactive shell after the update, this
is used when starting an upgrade using the web GUI.
additional information, like when a node reboot is required, due to a kernel
update. Additionally, it can run an interactive shell after the update. This is
used when starting an upgrade using the web GUI.
If you are already logged in on the console, it is preferable to invoke
`apt` directly.

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# pmgversion -v
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Please use the Debian package management for details about other packages
Please use the Debian package manager for details about other packages:
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# dpkg -l